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The sweat dripping from the matted mass of his oily hair stung his eyes, along with the tears that were beginning to come up… He could hardly breathe…his breath came in short gasps…the mob had disappeared ages ago…he clenched and unclenched his fists, trying to find a solid grip… He fought back the aching pressure building in his cheast, and squeezed his eyes shut, trying to minimize his pain… He ran his small hand along his dark purple side…a large welt had formed, the pain of his touch made his eyes burst… He fell to his knees, giving in to the increasing tension, and felt it slowly make its way up to his dry throat… His whole skinny body shook with a chorus of choking sobs… The inside of his burlap mask scratched against his wet face, and made his tears even more salty, and the salt ran in the shallow scratches made by the worn cloth… But he didn’t dare take it off… There was no hope… he had nowhere to go… No one wanted him…
His head shot up, a hand…a cool, clean, white hand… It ran along the top of his head…the burlap rubbed against the length of his face as it slid off of him…The fingers…sharp and monstrous…they ran across his brow, gently wiping the dirt and grease away… It was clean when it was taken away from his scarred face… His stinging eyes met the gaze of a single yellow orb…The black slit fell on him, and smiled… The tension released…slowly…his fists unclenched…and his fingers stretched to meet those of the being…
He followed the glow wherever it would lead him…Through the darkness; into the catacombs…He never left its gaze… The darkness waned as he made his way deeper and deeper into it… The comforting glow faded with it… He looked up to see where it had gone…looked to either side of him…behind him…nothing… He stared straight ahead…a bed… Every step towards it felt lighter than the last… He was reaching out, as though expecting the whole scene to vanish, and he be back where he was…staring ahead through cold, iron bars…harsh laughter from adults and screams from small children…
His fingers wrapped around a fold…It was soft and velvet like… He had only felt that once, when he had had the chance to caress the curtain of a circus tent…held up to the bars of his parked cage by an unseen force… He held the blanket close to his emaciated cheast, and allowed its warmth to circulate through his entire weakened form… His body was lifted carefully, placed under the sheet, and set down as her bony fingers slid out from under his tender back…
“Sleep well tonight…”
The flickering of the candle caught the glow of her eye…its brightest shine almost as white as her slender face. A soft whisper from between her fangs extinguished the burning wick into a charred, black string…Wisps of smoke rose from it and became as black as the darkness…rising into the stone ceiling… She faded with them, and became part of the masonry…
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Author's Comments

I kept listening to "Rem" from the DN soundtrack and "Taking You Home" from Balto 2 when I wrote this story. Really, if you play those songs at the right times as you're reading this, it really hits you :D

*sigh* I wish I could turn this into a "whole" story, but I am still working on the "filling in " action for writing stories...:p

But anyway, this one is about the Phantom, as a child, who was called "the devil's child" because of his facial disfigurement in the movie, and Rem, yes Rem, the one I ALWAYS put as the motherly one, is the "angel" that protects him and shows him that he is not alone in the harsh world :) awwww....

At first, I thought of her and him as an adult couple, but him as a little kid seemed sweeter :) : ) :)

They fit together because Rem is beautiful despite being seen as a "monster" to others, as is the phantom, and this is how he connects to her, and sees her as "beautiful" as well :D

Comments are appreciated
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Phantom of the Opera and Death Note and Balto are all property of their original creators...I just write the stories...:D

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Fucking gorgeous imagery!

Where do you get the DN soundtrack?

*I have drank from the chalice of the Ossified One, Her soul is integrated with mine! Her ethereal blood runs through my veins! She makes me remember, I am electric! What humanity finds as beauty is ugliness compared to our otherworldly kin, the Collective, our legion of extraordinary entities...*

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Ryuk -- A Name Easier Burped Than Spoken
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*blushes to the whites of my eyes*

Thank you sooo much!!!! :D :D :D :D

I was listening to it on YOutube XD

(amen) :D :D :D :D :D

THere's a part 2!!! :D

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A warrior you are, your head is made of glass, your body is made of stone, and your heart is made of brass...Your body of stone soon crumbles, another shatters your head of glass, your brazen plated heart is the only thing that lasts...
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I listened to it as well off of Youtube...I thought you had a CD! :doh:

I have yet to read part 2.

yes. I get a little too saintly -adoration -like with a few specific entities out there, but I mean every word.

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Ryuk -- A Name Easier Burped Than Spoken
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Isn't that song depressing? I almost have to force myself to cry because I'm so focused on how sad it is...yeah, weird...:o

Well, hurry up!!! I've already finished part 3!!! DX

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A warrior you are, your head is made of glass, your body is made of stone, and your heart is made of brass...Your body of stone soon crumbles, another shatters your head of glass, your brazen plated heart is the only thing that lasts...
:iconsaetianphrenaltid:
It's a grand song to theta-surf to! theta-surfing = meditating into that state between sleep and wakefulness.

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Ryuk -- A Name Easier Burped Than Spoken
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That state always scare me :o Have you ever been asleep and you wake up, but your body won't move when you want it to? It's scary...D:

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A warrior you are, your head is made of glass, your body is made of stone, and your heart is made of brass...Your body of stone soon crumbles, another shatters your head of glass, your brazen plated heart is the only thing that lasts...
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Sleep paralysis? It's nothing more than your soul on AWOL! I do agree, it is scary, especially if one is spooked awake and can't move.

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Ryuk -- A Name Easier Burped Than Spoken
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AWOL? :o

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A warrior you are, your head is made of glass, your body is made of stone, and your heart is made of brass...Your body of stone soon crumbles, another shatters your head of glass, your brazen plated heart is the only thing that lasts...
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absent without leave

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Ryuk -- A Name Easier Burped Than Spoken

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